Friday, September 7, 2018

Cold Salt Water by Maria C McCarthy: Analysis


The given story is about immigration and its effects on the society and prejudices towards the immigrants depicted through the interaction between a loving and concerned mother and her rebellious son. The story also has a coming-of-age theme within it where the mother narrates how she has understood that her son has grown up into an adult and wants to have his own separate identity. The whole revolves around a particular incident mentioned right from the first line with suggestions that the narrator’s son, called Kieran, has got into a terrible fight and has badly injured himself. As the story progresses, the readers get exposed to the possible causes of the fight and there is a strong implication that it has something to do with racism and immigration.

The story begins with a conversation between Kieran, the central character of the story and his mother, who acts as the narrator. This conversation tells the readers that Kieran has got himself into a terrible fight. Descriptions like “shirt splattered with blood” and “nose spread across your face” in the beginning of the story clearly suggests that the fight was pretty bad. Kieran’s character is also described neatly near the beginning. Going to “Tiffany’s”, a disco, wearing a good “Ben Sherman” shirt implies that Kieran is an active and outgoing young adult. He is no longer the little kid who “sniff the snot back up into his nose” because his father told him that “boys don’t cry”. Therefore, we can establish that Kieran is capable of making his own decisions and the fight which has taken place is done willingly. 


The story is written in a third person limited point of view of the narrator, who also portrays the character of Kieran’s mother in the short story. She goes on to describe her relationship with her son and provide a context for the whole story as well. She reminisces how, over the course of time, her son grew up and she can no longer control him now that she “need to stand on a chair to look him in the eye”. Yet, being a mother, she has this maternal instinct to protect her son from all harms even if all she can do is just wash his blood-stained shirt.

The setting of the story in terms of place is not as significant as in terms of time. The whole story basically takes place in the home of the main character. But the time is significant and it is understood when the characters sat in the kitchen listening to the radio which announced the bombing incident which had taken place in a pub called Guildford. These bombings took place in England during 1970s and the incident was carried out by the IRA, the Irish Republican Army. The characters introduced in the story are also confirmed to be of Irish origin. Hence, from this connection, we can safely assume that the fight Kieran is involved in has something to do with the bombings. The fact that Kieran does not want to acknowledge being an Irish – “I ain’t Irish” – suggests that he was a victim of prejudices formed against the Irish community as a whole, which resulted from the bombings.

The fact that Kieran wants to get rid of his Irish origin and blend in with the British is further confirmed by how he chose to go Tiffany’s, a common place for British youngsters to go for fun, instead of the traditional Tara club. His choice of condom, Durex, which is “approved to British standards” is a clear symbolization his transition into the British culture. Basically, Kieran was embarrassed of his Irish roots due to the bombing incident and the prejudices – the fight in the beginning – he faced for being who he is. He is bullied into demonizing his own racial roots. Kieran’s denial also acts as the climax of the story.

The story goes into a falling action after Kieran’s denial of being Irish and the shifts to the mother. The last paragraph is particularly important because the imagery of the last paragraph summarizes the plot and the theme of the whole story. It perfectly captures the underlying message of the story. The last line – “I watch the shirt, pushing it down so it’s covered” – suggests that prejudices against the Irish will not be removed any time soon. The shirt poses as a symbol for prejudice while the cold water, previously mixed with salt and has turned pink due to the clotted blood, symbolizes Kieran’s act of denial and the mother’s support and acceptance of her son’s decision. The mother initially may have opposed his views loudly. But the final act of the mother is a clear indication that she herself knows that the prejudices formed against them is going to stay for a while.

The short story is deceptively simple with a deep message tucked under the veil of its straightforward writing style and the smooth transition of events that take place in the story. Overall, the story tries to illustrate the condition of the Irish in the British community after the Guildford pub bombings. It is heavily implied in the story that the condition has been mostly negative to the point where people can get beaten just for being Irish, as depicted through Kieran. It is a common human nature that people form a negative attitude towards particular groups especially if a section of the group commits a serious crime. The writer does quite a good job in capturing this mentality through this short story.   




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