Plenty" by Isobel Dixon is a poem which explores the vivid childhood memories and experiences of the poet.Dixon describes, in this poem, her youth when she and her sisters could not afford the things they so greedily stole behind their mother's back; finally comparing it to her prosperous present. Plenty is based on Dixon's chaotic youth with her sisters. It explores the themes of chaos, restriction, and realization.
The poet starts by telling us that
they used to run 'riot' and this was more than the mother could cope with. We
are not told whether the behavior was meant to annoy the mother or it was just
a normal prank played and enjoyed by children. The situation in stanza is not a
pleasant one as the poet gives us a grim picture of the situation they had to
cope with. Water was a rare commodity and because of that they could not afford
the luxury of filling the 'old enamel a tub' which we are told was
'age-stained' and rusty. The reason for that is given in stanza two where the
poet explains that there was persistent drought and dams were dry and
'windmills stalled.'
The most interesting thing about the
description here is that she compares her mother's smile to the stalled
windmill and the dry dam. One gets the impression that even though the mother
was smiling it lacked the warmth of a genuine smile. We are also made to
understand that such a smile almost always came when she had done something
wrong. She continues to tell us that her mother smiling at their faults was a
ploy to keep them from being chaotic or mischievous. What we learn from this is
that the mother did not do anything to scold the children perhaps because she
knew shouting and ranting was not going to work. We are told that this
situation was on-going. Added to all this was the fact the mother had to worry
about how to provide the bare necessities of life for her children and ensure
that there was food on the table. It was not a cheerful situation because 'each
month was weeks too long.'
Dixon writes about her memories of
the past, often referring to her mother's anger over the chaos she and her
sisters create by ignoring the mother's restrictions. These verses“not knowing
then it was a clasp to keep us all from chaos” shows that as you get older, you
realize the importance of order and begin appreciating your parent's hard
labor.
The structure and the verses are
written in such a format that the whole poem, even though reads as a poem,
gives a story-like effect. This story progresses in a manner from her childhood
memories to the self-indulgence of adulthood. She remembers how they were so
poor that “She saw it always, snapping locks and straps, the spilling: sums and
worries, shopping lists for aspirin, porridge, petrol, bread. Even the toilet
paper counted, and each month was weeks too long.” But instead the poet thought,
ironically, mother was just being mean.
Stanza five begins with a litany of
the pranks the poet and her sisters used to play. They 'skipped chores' and
when the mother was not near, they indulged in the 'lovely sin' of filling the
bath beyond the recommended limit given by their mother. However, stanza five
is also a discovery for the poet. She tells us that as children they did not
understand why their mother had to impose those water restrictions or why she
had to bother about every little prank they played. 'We thought her mean' is
enough to tell us that she has realized this.
Stanza seven echoes the title of the
poem as we are told how water is no longer in short supply. The poet can afford
to stay in the bath for as long as she wishes and can fill the tub to the brim
if she so wishes. The 'now' at the beginning of the stanza tells us that the
poet's situation has changed. Unlike the past she is now a 'sybarite' and
devotes herself to luxury. It is as if she is making up for all the luxury she
lost in childhood.
The metaphor 'The shower's a hot
cascade' describes vividly the poet's feeling. She is comparing the shower to
water fountain and not only that it is hot. She can even afford to leave the
heating on. The last stanza begins with a feeling of nostalgia. The poet misses
her sisters who, we can confidently say, are no longer staying with their
mother. They have all moved on and perhaps enjoying the luxury of a filled bath
tub. She even misses her mother's smile. Unlike in the past the mother's smile
is full of mirth because the 'lean dry times' are over. We get the impression
that their mother's suffering was due to their long childhood and now that they
are able to fend for themselves since most of their problems have gone. The
mother is now happy and does not have to worry about a month which was 'weeks
too long.'
A casual reading of the poem will
make the reader think it is a reminiscence of someone's childhood experiences.
But underneath this surface lies the themes and messages the poet puts across.
We learn that patience can help us deal with a lot of life's everyday problems.
Instead of adults taking their frustrations onto their children they should
learn to cope with these frustrations. We also learn from the mother's
reactions to the children's behavior that children must be allowed to be
children and occasionally brought onto the straight path when necessary.
The mother did not do anything that
would have driven the children away from home. She did not blame the children
for the fact that she could not afford a luxury for herself and the children.
What she did is what every parent should learn: she accepted her responsibility
as a parent and understood that the children did not negotiate with her to come
into the world.
Her responsibility was to provide the
physical, biological and emotional needs of her childrenIt is also good that
poet later realized the mother was not being mean after all. This is also a
very important message for the youth of today. They should understand that every parent wants the best for their children and even though
they may see some of the decisions taken by adults as harsh in the long run it
is for their own benefit.
No comments:
Post a Comment